{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"66060564","dateCreated":"1392003511","smartDate":"Feb 9, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/noraalford.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66060564"},"dateDigested":1532726243,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"general","description":"Confusing ad. For revision, there are really three things for you to do:
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\n1. Consider why it would be the woman herself who is dead - how that proves what you say about the jewelry.
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\n2. Consider what kind of audience they thing they are targeting with an ad like this. I doubt it's just "upper class women" - I don't think your average wealthy middle-aged lady in River Oaks would find this ad appealing. So who is it?
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\n3. Why do they think this ad would get someone to buy their jewelry?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[{"id":"66060530","dateCreated":"1392003377","smartDate":"Feb 9, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/noraalford.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66060530"},"dateDigested":1532726243,"commentId":"486497516_1","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Need title","description":"Need title","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"A young beautiful w","dateCreated":"1392003378","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/jewelry+ad+essay+1\/488377588?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"66060532","dateCreated":"1392003378","smartDate":"Feb 9, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/noraalford.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66060532"},"dateDigested":1532726243,"commentId":"486497516_2","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Ok. Frankly I had no idea what the ad...","description":"Ok. Frankly I had no idea what the ad was saying, so this seems as good an explanation as any.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"look just at the piece, it appears as if it is worth hundreds or thousands of dollars. The message that is trying to be conveyed is that the jewelry on this woman is so beautiful and makes such a bold statement that it will stopped her heart and can stop the hearts of other people who see the piece on you. Women like for other women to fall in love","dateCreated":"1392003378","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/jewelry+ad+essay+1\/488377588?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"look just at the piece, it appears as if it is worth hundreds or thousands of dollars. The message that is trying to be conveyed is that the jewelry on this woman is so beautiful and makes such a bold statement that it will stopped her heart. Women like for other women to fall in love","dateCreated":"1392238685","user":{"username":"W4914846","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/W4914846","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/jewelry+ad+essay+1\/489123012?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"66060534","dateCreated":"1392003378","smartDate":"Feb 9, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/noraalford.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66060534"},"dateDigested":1532726243,"commentId":"486497516_3","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: But it's her own heart that's stopped...","description":"But it's her own heart that's stopped. Not someone looking at her. How does this show what you are saying?","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"photographer uses pathos to grab the attention of women. The creators behind this ad wanted to play into the desires and needs and fears of women. The intended message was \u201cif you wear this piece you will be bold and stop hearts.\u201d They played into women wanting this, which is how the creators kept the women\u2019s attention. It has been said that if you want to get a females attention than make a bold statement. If you want to keep a females attention, keep her interested. That is essentially what this ad did.","dateCreated":"1392003379","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/jewelry+ad+essay+1\/488377588?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"photographer uses pathos to grab the attention of women. The creators behind this ad wanted to play into the desires and needs and fears of women. The intended message was \u201cwear this piece it is heart stopping gorgeous!\u201d They played into women wanting this, which is how the creators kept the women\u2019s attention. I believe that the ad is trying to say that anyone who sees this will love it and that is what makes this so desirable. Everyone wants to be more desirable and awed at.
\nIt has been said that if you want to get a females attention than make a bold statement. If you want to keep a females attention, keep her interested. That is essentially what this ad did.","dateCreated":"1392238685","user":{"username":"W4914846","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/W4914846","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/jewelry+ad+essay+1\/489123012?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"66060538","dateCreated":"1392003379","smartDate":"Feb 9, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/noraalford.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66060538"},"dateDigested":1532726243,"commentId":"486497516_4","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Consider - why would an ad like this ...","description":"Consider - why would an ad like this be appealing? IS it really promoting jewelry to say it's so beautiful it will kill you?","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"tant part of this ad is the defibulator paddles. Without the defibulator paddles the message of this ad wouldn\u2019t have been perceived. Instead it would have just been a picture of a woman wearing fancy jewelry. I believe this ad has potential to be very effective but it is not there just yet. If it had more jewelry on the female, it would have been more effective in sending the message of the jewelry being stunning and an absolute must have. The ad doesn\u2019t even name the company that has paid for the ad to run. How are we supposed to know where to get this beautiful piece from so we can buy it? In conclusion I do not believe that this ad is effective yet. With a little more work they could have sent out a clearer and bolder sta","dateCreated":"1392003379","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/jewelry+ad+essay+1\/488377588?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"tant part of this ad is the defibulator paddles. Without the defibulator paddles the message of this ad wouldn\u2019t have been perceived. Instead it would have just been a picture of a woman wearing fancy jewelry. I believe this ad has potential to be very effective but it is not there just yet. If it had more jewelry on the female, it would have been more effective in sending the message of the jewelry being stunning and an absolute must have. That being said, no jewelry can kill no matter how gorgeous it is. The ad should have been more realistic in my opinion. The ad doesn\u2019t even name the company that has paid for the ad to run. How are we supposed to know where to get this beautiful piece from so we can buy it? In conclusion I do not believe that this ad is effective yet. With a little more work they could have sent out a clearer and bolder sta","dateCreated":"1392238685","user":{"username":"W4914846","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/W4914846","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/jewelry+ad+essay+1\/489123012?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}