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You have to explain why this is a reason for the nymph not to do it, or explain what the nymph says about it. 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You have to explain that to me here in the essay.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"\u201d. <u><span style=\"font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif';\">\"Friends with benefits, more than friends? 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Not sure how it is &quot;ignorant....","description":"1. Not sure how it is &quot;ignorant.&quot;<br \/>\n2. If he doesn't care about &quot;sin,&quot; why is this a reason not to do it?","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"The shepherd wants to live ignorantly in sin. <a name=\"comment-492927060_10-open\" class=\"range\" id=\"comment-492927060_10-open\"><\/a>The Nymph is smart and wants to plan out her future<a name=\"comment-492927060_10-close\" class=\"range\" id=\"comment-492927060_10-close\"><\/a>.","dateCreated":"1394978468","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/The+Nymph+and+the+Shepherd\/496105194?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"66579298","dateCreated":"1394978469","smartDate":"Mar 16, 2014","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/noraalford.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/66579298"},"dateDigested":1532726228,"commentId":"492927060_11","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Sin and religion are not anywhere in ...","description":"Sin and religion are not anywhere in the two poems. So when you talk about it, you have to explain exactly what you believe and why you believe it, and why you think they could not seize the day and be happy if they don't care about that.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"living in sin and they will have to worry about what society will think and how they will treat them. I was raised to believe that what is right is living by the bible. For a man and a woman to coexist and have premarital sex would be a sin. I think that the nymph is trying to convince the shepherd that her way of thoughts are correct and will help get them into a more blissful life. The shepherds\u2019 argument to this would be that the nymph does not in fact know that by living with him and having premarital sex would not allow them to have a more blissful life. Lust is one of the biggest 7 deadly sin. It was written inside of the poem basically that the shepherd is just lusting after the nymph. What kind of life or punishment would that bring for the both of them?","dateCreated":"1394978470","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/The+Nymph+and+the+Shepherd\/496105194?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}